Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Introduction

Every summer my family and I head to Tybee thinking about how amazing it is. My family goes every year. It is like a tradition. It is the best place in the world to my family and me. It is a place where you can relax, swim, and hangout with your friends. It is the greatest place on the earth and I want to live their all my life. But, I never knew that one tragic day everything about that remarkable place would change forever.

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